All Comments on 'Robin vs Gotham City Sirens Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Justice League?

Wonder Woman, Zatanna, Black Canary, Vixen, Power Girl

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Good hot story, with exciting action.

TLB1981TLB1981about 6 years ago

Looks like poison ivy has a bit of mother in her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Very hot story, but with three such famous or even iconic characters, I think it could have been a little longer (especially the teasing and undressing of Robin parts, in my opinion).

Still, very good job, waiting eagerly for the next episodes !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Keep it coming

Very enjoyable story. I can't wait to see how it continues.

I also like the devious motives Ivy & Harley had. (beyond simple pleasure in having a rockin' night with the Boy Wonder)

It'd be cool if every time they overcome Robin from now on, they 'rock his world' again. (essentially using positive reinforcement to subconsciously encourage him to 'lose' to them, or fail to catch them, over & over.)

TLB1981TLB1981almost 6 years ago

That emotional connection goes both ways they can start to care for him.

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