All Comments on 'Rock River Ch. 04: Helena'

Should of cum in her knocked her up with your kid in her

He cheated on his wife...I fuckin loathe.. despise.. detest .. and hate cheaters fucking behind their spouses back...not worth voting on

This story is well-written with an excellent story line- except for the cheating element. The story would be even better if it were revised and the cheating portion eliminated.

Yeah, the general theme was interesting, but I should have guessed from the "Bar Ten" nonsense that guilt-free cheating, habitual lying, and other "acceptable" vices would be the main theme of these chapters. Not my thing. I don't fantasize about hurting and destroying others for benefit of my own narcissism. It's only fiction, but there's enough true evil in life that I don't have to fantasize about it, and certainly not, envy it. Zero stars.