All Comments on 'Rock River Ch. 09: Revenge'

Love this ending.

I don’t think English is your first language as there were a LOT of grammar mistakes. I read all 9 chapters and though the story and plot line was very hot and exciting you had an extensive list of grammatical errors. In addition, you had several sentences where it seemed like you forgot what you were trying to say and had 2 partial sentences that were together and there fore they didn’t make any sense.

One of the mistakes that you repeated several times was the phrase, “was sat”. That is not proper English. It should be, “was sitting”.

I wish there was enough room where I could show you all the grammar mistakes that you made as it would truly make you a better writer.

Embrace my criticism, don’t be hurt or upset about it. Everyone needs coaching, even professional sports players have coaches to make them better.

I enjoyed the story...the orgy was hot... but I don't agree with the revenge...two wrongs don't make it right... At the end.. I wish Rich would have fucked her ass not her pussy

I hope that some day you will continue this, there's so many possibilities!

Bravo