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Click hereShe sent one last savage groan into the air and her body collapsed back down on the carpet, limp and spent. I shuffled up next to her and wrapped my arm across her chest and held her close.
"Do you forgive me?" I whispered into her ear as I began to pay attention back to the onlookers around us who had all started to re-dress.
Rachel looked back at me lethargically. "We'll see. You remember what Jessica's rules were?"
I nodded back. "Yes honey, I'll tell you everything. And you can do whatever you want. Especially if it's this again, this was so hot," I replied as I nuzzled into her shoulder.
"I don't quite think you understand punishment," she laughed.
Jessica suddenly appeared over the two of us with a wide grin and two swinging breasts hanging above our heads. "My work here is done... again. Your lives are going to be much more fun from now on," she said and chuckled as she stepped away. "Come on everyone, let's leave this two to it. Looks like they're done. I'm still horny as fuck though, the party continues at our place!"
The ten of them collected the rest of their belongings and followed Jessica out of the door. I wasn't sure who had followed them to their house to carry on the orgy, but I couldn't help but smile as I lay there cuddling Rachel and picturing the eight of them all servicing Jessica and Arwen, or servicing each other. Rachel fell asleep exhausted in my arms and I held her there, naked and spent on the floor for hours until she woke, and we fucked some more.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoI hope that some day you will continue this, there's so many possibilities!
Bravo
IFAFILHGover 3 years agoI enjoyed the story...the orgy was hot... but I don't agree with the revenge...two wrongs don't make it right... At the end.. I wish Rich would have fucked her ass not her pussy
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI don’t think English is your first language as there were a LOT of grammar mistakes. I read all 9 chapters and though the story and plot line was very hot and exciting you had an extensive list of grammatical errors. In addition, you had several sentences where it seemed like you forgot what you were trying to say and had 2 partial sentences that were together and there fore they didn’t make any sense.
One of the mistakes that you repeated several times was the phrase, “was sat”. That is not proper English. It should be, “was sitting”.
I wish there was enough room where I could show you all the grammar mistakes that you made as it would truly make you a better writer.
Embrace my criticism, don’t be hurt or upset about it. Everyone needs coaching, even professional sports players have coaches to make them better.
