All Comments on 'Rocky Road'

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 4 years ago
At First

At first I thought this was going to be a "Be careful what you wish for" kind of story, but then it morphed into a "Your wish has come true" kind of story. The switch was, in my opinion, masterfully done. For me, I was constantly worried our slut heroine might have had a dust allergy. Nice that, apparently, she doesn't! Your writing never disappoints. 5* Your fan, JB

PS: Every girl needs a BFF like Tracy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
fake rape v real rape?

I'm leaning towards calling this real rape. Fantasies aside, that girl needs to reconsider dating that guy, because he went from a drunk 0 to 60 without consent or even the barest hint of conversation establishing interest in what he wanted to do.

And that guy needs a fucking reality check.

1. I dunno what the friend said, but it sounds like he decides what to do based on the advice of someone who should have no say in the topic. That conversation needed to be with the main character.

2. When it comes to fantasy erotica, I'm good with kinky sex. I'm good with noncon. I'm here, after all.

I am not good with trying to make violent noncon seem consensual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
"No, not the attic!"

"The bedroom is for vanilla folks, but we aren't serving vanilla today. Today it's rocky road! "

I fucking died! Lol

Thanks for another good one.

SlutProblemsSlutProblemsover 4 years agoAuthor
JB

That dust imagery was my attempt at showing how ridiculous Mitch was being about proving his “rocky roadness.” She could have easily had an allergy and killed the mood. That was lucky 😂

- JJ

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