All Comments on 'Rogue State Ch. 03'

by franksummers

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helvornhelvornover 16 years ago
Great progressive mind control

I liked the slow burn of the mind control as the captors ratcheted up the drugs and subliminal messages. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
more please

loved the story...cant wait for the next chapter

smy3thsmy3thover 16 years ago
Excellent!

Great story so far. Can't wait to see where it goes. A little different than the usual of its genre. This is an intelligent mind-fuck of an interrogation. Good detail, nice development, and you keep teasing us waiting for her to get fucked! I am wanting it soooo bad! Take me now!

I've read through chapter 04, but 04 was not set up to allow comments for some reasonebf1 unfortunately, or I would have left my comment there.

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