All Comments on 'Roman Delight Ch. 09'

Enjoyable but you need someone to edit the stories for you as the many errors become annoying quite quickly.

Thank you for sharing your talents with us. I was quite impressed by the depth and breadth of your knowledge of the time period. It more than made up for the typos beach01 mentioned. You need a proofreader more than an editor. It’s difficult to proofread your own work since you know what you meant, so your mind tends to supply what should be there rather than what is actually present. One tip that can help is slowly reading the story out loud. You’ll find your ears can catch errors that your eyes skip right over. I’m looking forward to your next submission.

Outstanding story. The ancient Roman setting was very good.