by EgmontGrigor2020
World War 11?? Lol I love to read and find these gems. I found this story to be interesting (like your other stories I have read). I liked the characters and the wording of the story. I liked the build up and the banter between the people. 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Far too many cases of inappropriate word substitutions. Example: expect in place of inspect. Get a proofreader or maybe read it yourself.
Nice! But not really finished. Don't leave it all to the readers, fill in some of the emty spots. It is romance ;-)