All Comments on 'Romancing the Sale'

Having read the original story a few time, I really enjoy the retake of what you have done. Adding in the extra material has taken it to new heights. Thanks

What can I say? Combining the original story premise with your additional plot ideas has woven a story that reaches even greater heights of enjoyment for this reader. As some would say it's "more better !"

Loved the original and this is a most excellent read also.

Great rewrite of one of my favorite stories

Sales Team was one of the first stories to make it on my long-term favourites list and has been reread multiple times. On seeing inthe opening summary that this story was a re-hash I was simultaneously happy & concerned.

However it was a nice rewrite, a few portions where the flow of the original was lost, & parts where the expansion in detail was beneficial.

I'll say I still prefer the original, but this deserved the 5 stars it received IMO.

Worthy successor to Cat5's story!

He has also posted 15 stories on SOL: 9 in 2005/6 and 6 in 2020. They are the same ones posted on Literotica.

5

If there were 10 stars possible, I'd give you a whopping 10! The story was a well written piece. I found a few typos, but nothing that distracted from the story. The sex was not as prominent as in many stories on Literotica, but it fit well into the entire story. Great job!

Sales Team by Cat5 is a favourite, i've probably read it 7 or 8 times.

If I'm being honest, i couldn't get past page two of this one. The usage of the present tense was just so damn annoying. It's a format that few authors use, other than script writing. There's a reason for that...

In any case, i do appreciate the effort, both in the writing and in the hommage. I've respectively declined to vote.

10 stars!!! Well written. Just needed an epilog to tell how many kids they had.....

Great Story, theme and plot had me locked in to see what was going to happen next. You deserve more than the 5 stars offered.