All Comments on 'Romantic Roulette 01: First Date'

Excellent!

At the absolute least - enable Spellcheck!

However, even Spellcheck will not help you is you have a correctly spelled word, but the wrong word for the context!

Get an EDITOR!

You appear to be borderline illiterate. Sponsor != sponser whatever the latter is.

Ok, first, I just want to say that this is a very good story! I loved the guy's change in character to suit the situation, that part was well thought out.

Second, what the fuck is with these comments? Yall are nitpicking and you damn-well know it. I've seen hundreds of stories with nightmarish spelling and grammar, and yet here you are, bitching about small-ass mistakes. If you feel the need to criticize, DO IT KINDLY. Folks don't need to be shit on when they make a few mistakes.

loved this story

Interesting story. Coming from the Boomer generation, even as a fictional erotic account, I found the attitudes and sexual mores expressed illuminating about today's online singles. Perhaps not for everyone but clearly for a growing number of singles.

I love the comments about stupid lil spelling errors when the person cant even write the comment correctly. Even famous authors have mistakes in printed novels so cut these authors some slack please. I'm sick of seeing ppl make these comments on nearly every story. If ur unhappy about it, stop reading n find a dif story. Plus stop hiding n use a real user name n own up to your comments, dont be a hidden keyboard pussy.

Other then that, great story, I enjoyed it very much!!!

Pretty hot story.