by tantaluseros
Nothing too unusual about the age difference; a marriage later in life, a younger daughter or a "surprise" late pregnancy could account for it. The youngest of my sisters is 42 years younger than my father. That was my father's second marriage.
Otherwise the story was a nice little vignette.
But you went from zero to fuck faster than a drag race.
And what's the point of throwing in an 18 year old?
Otherwise the premise is good.