by illdefinedthoughts
This need a follow on. I agree I wish my Daddy would fuck. seed and breed me. Even as lesbian He is The Man I would let do that. Fuuuuck
TBC
Love it, makes my pussy so wet...I cum so hard playing with my pussy while reading this..makes you feel like you are right there in the story, I so need to be fucked like this!!!!❤
this was a great story! I loved the dirty talk and the pending doom of mom coming home. I also loved the lack of descriptions of the participants, allowing the reader to conjure up their own images of the incestuous pair.
would love to see a prequel of the first time they fucked, to learn who seduced whom.
5*s
I just wanted to thank everyone for their support with this story. I have been writing erotic stories for a few years now. I haven't published any of the other stories because none of them are finished. This story popped into my head about a year ago and I just now decided to post it. This is my only 'quickie' story. Based on all of the great feedback I will write more stories about Ronnie and her father. I want to keep the characters as androgynous as possible so that reader can insert their own fantasy lover. Thanks again for all the responses both public and private. Stay tuned for the further amorus adventures with Ronnie and her bad dad.
Agree with UAlbanygirl that a prequel would be very hot. This has great potential.
Not having a daughter of my own, I love reading of other dads fucking and breeding their slutty daughters.
Can't wait for more
This is just fantastic, passionate, slutty sex. No background bullshit. What more could a reader want? More Ronnie!
I also know what Ronnie wants -- deep anal and atm!
I fucked my daughter for 2 years before she married and left me, I can't forget her beautiful pussy and ass
more of the twisted thoughts between them... make them happen.... freakin' hot!
Pretty good story, but a couple of details:
The prostate is NOT a muscle. It is a gland and a man can not "clinch" (sic) it.
The verb you are looking for is more likely "clench", and any clenching in that region may be done with the pelvic muscles.
She "revealed" in some feeling, should be "reveled".
And while talk of her devotion and willingness to do anything for him is hot, please, if there ever is a follow-up, avoid actually having her blow the disgusting boss and don't pimp her out or lend her out to others. An immediate turn-off, at least for me.