All Comments on 'Room Share'

Beautiful !

Fantastic! Well written and thought out story line.

Lovely premise.

Beautifully written.

Nicely paced.

Sure would have liked more in the way of interplay when they were jointly masturbating. Some dialog about how much each liked watching the other. Dialog about how good it felt. Dialog with each giving the other some directions/instructions about what they'd like to see the other do. Dialog about getting close to orgasms. Slowing down to extend the enjoyment before cumming.

Four stars.

That was so hot. The more I read, the hornier, wetter I became.

very very well done

I really enjoyed this story. I hope that there will be a followup! This is definitely one to keep to re-read. Well done.

Well done. I truly enjoyed this and look forward to a followup to cover the next week and a half of their stay "for the conference".

Very well done. It is nice to see your return to posting here. I can't wait to read how the night sleeping with each other goes. There is a lot that can happen for the next week and a half " at the conference". Bring on the follow-up.

Part 2 I hope ….I enjoyed reading that ty

Damn. Nice slow burn! Good job!

Loved the slow escalation of their obvious attraction to each other.

What's great about this story is it's is about exhibitionism Erotic, very much so.

Long on the build-up, sometimes just a bit too long. By the time we got to the camera, I was skipping every other paragraph.

I do look forward to more.

very good story. perfect in detail and substance. this is one of my favorites. i had an erection through most of the story.

Spectacular. Erotic, and just the right amount of rising tension that built up nicely

One of the better stories I have read lately. Hope there is a chapter two

Great writing in a category which doesn’t always get how sensual and erotic exhibitionism can be. Very few errors to spoil the flow, though your use of ‘vagina’ instead of ‘vulva’ was a little annoying. The vagina is the internal part.

Brilliant story, gradually drawing into what seems are real heartfelt merging of minds, teasing and tantalising.

Loved the genre, keep it up.

A good story well told. 5*

Love, love, LOVE this story. This will stick in my mind and my fantasies for a long time… and I’ll look hopefully forward to reenacting any part of it with a lady who likes her body to be admired.

-voyeur photographer

Wow. Flawless.

Fantastic

The most extraordinarily great story I've read on this site in awhile. Wonderful pacing and build-up. Desperate for Part 2!

Torture waiting for part two …

Its soo good! Waiting for the next one!

This is so beautiful and erotic. The buildup? Exquisite

Wish there was a 6. Erotic concept....well written.

love it, as an australian the use of cunt puts me off but otherwise great stuff

I am a big romantic — this is incredibly romantic, sweet, and hot!!! I am just so wow, I can’t think of a better scenario that I would love to experience! Well, maybe being with the right young lady in front of a romantic fireplace for many hours teasing until that ultimate edge!

Good premise.

But sex simply flowed past like a slow moving river.

Needed more action with breasts. Needed dialog about what body parts he liked best -- other women's and hers. And what he'd like to do to/with them.

Three stars.

Excellent writing. Now, on to Chapter 2.

Oh my god …. Thank you.p

Lovely story. Just right for two people who respect and care for one another. Good pace and sexy!

Very romantic… 5 stars!

Nice premise.

Beautifully slow. Good buildup.

Somehow the picture taking at the end came down from the high of the mutual masturbation.

Probably would have liked more dialog during the mutual masturbation about what each was thinking about while masturbating. And maybe some requests/instructions about making it visually more exciting.

Nevertheless, five stars,

Great story though that I was in room and enjoyed watching

Very nice build up and nice ending. I like the personal space they kept trying to give each other while slowly succumbing to each other.

Quit once you came out with that "historical male sexual aggressive" bull shit