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hardheadd1hardheadd1almost 8 years ago
:-)

Good work. Keep it up

Star_gliderStar_glideralmost 8 years ago
Really liked it

I love the setup. There's so much potential here for more chapters.

One observation, though. I think the sex scenes could be drawn out a bit further; right now it feels to me like, "he shafted her, he came, the end".

Looking forward to chapter 2.

Ayang09Ayang09almost 8 years ago
Funny ending

Can't wait to see what happens next

Writer345Writer345over 7 years ago
Good Start!

This is an intriguing start... I'll be interested to see how it develops.

Trekkie469Trekkie469about 5 years ago
More Long Over Due

Great start to what could be a tremendously great fantasy. Please add to this fantasy that has me intrigued.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I'll be interested in what happens in the next chapter!

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