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by Master_Vassago

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Pretty Good

Not bad, it was alright. Everything happened a little fast and the ending was kinda lame, I find that stories that end with "But taht is another story.." or "And they did it all night long.." seem quie childish. Rather good though, feeling kinda hot now I read that.

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