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All Comments on 'Roommate Agreement Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
you're right

needs more work and more plot development. it's not a good read as is. you said you weren't sure it has legs, i'm telling you it's an amputee.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Erotic

I came so hard reading this

tzzzrtzzzrover 4 years ago
It has possibilities

If your into it give it another try, give it another chapter or so in the current agreement. Then maybe Darla needs some help fixing her truck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great concepts.

Really love this concept, hits me just right.

Loved the game of Never Have I Ever as a lead-in for icebreaking a sex agreement. Great idea.

I'd love to read more of this.

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Love to hear feedback! That's the best way to reward authors for sharing their imagination. I also enjoy comments that are critical and constructive.