All Comments on 'Roommate - Huge Changes Ch. 01'

This is the first erotic novel I have ever written. There will be more chapters to come. As I am not an experienced writer any feedback is more than welcome. English isn't my first language as well ^^ Thank you so much for reading my story!

Great start, really wanted to keep reading more.

This is a very good beginning of yoru story, hope you have many more to tell us about and especially how feminine Ann is. Eager to rea much more.

Joanne

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good story. I hope at least Anna will have monster chicken 2 feet or more and also there will be size comparison between the two. Anna was supposed to be dominating and humiliating Ray. It would definitely look amazing, although I honestly wish Anna had a better body. such as height and giant breasts or with pronounced muscles. so he would look like a bodybuilder instead of Ray. that's it, can't wait to see the second chapter

Great start, looking forward to chapter 2!

A good start and I look forward to how it continues :)

Fajny interesujący początek i bardzo wciągający, już czekam niecierpliwie na kolejne rozdziały.

Może w pełni odnajdę siebie w Rayu (bo już widzę siebie w tej osobie).

SissyBoy z Warszawy