by Eikmoo
There we go! Chapter 2. If you have any requests of what they do together I can see if I can squeeze it in chapter 3 if it fits the story. Feedback is welcome! Thank you so much for reading! ^^
Nice so far. If you are taking suggestions, I suggest trying to be creative with the sex, with interesting positions. Best stories depict something new or different.
Hey! These first two chapters have done a great job of building anticipation. Can't wait to see how you handle the big reveal. :)
You mentioned him not being able to get her cock in his mouth, which of course makes sense if she's got 18+ inches of dick and the girth to match. Will something happen that makes it possible for him to give her a proper blowjob and/or let her top him? Something that either allows her size to change or him to stretch?
Nice chapter and a great story. It will be nice to watch Ray come into his own and stop worrying about everything so much. Looking ahead for another chapter.
The story is getting more and more interesting. I just feel dissatisfied with Ann's size. 19 inches is really big. But I wish he had at least 30 inches or so so he could actually split Ray in half.
Turned me on so much made me wish I was him with her...that would be amazing cant wait for more
Would be cool if Ann could retract her penis back into her vag at will and let out as much as she wants to use.
Meant to comment on this like 2 days ago but kinda forgot, so here goes. Honestly, so far the story's fantastic. Great hot detail, really good pacing, just makes you wanna see what happens next. Hell, it got me back into writing so it gets extra marks from me. Keep em coming!
Yes Chapter 3 is still in the works. I have redone it twice already because I don't get the right feel for it as well as I have been busy with boring IRL stuff. No worries I want to finish and share this story with everyone! It's really fun ^^
It was a really nice story until you told about the size of her cock sorry had to put down hate itt in the comments