by Eikmoo
That's chapter 3! This is so much fun. But this chapter doesnt feel as good as the second was. If you have any feedback please gimme. Im also doing a side thing where its a mother/son futa on male story with gigantic sizes. Chapter 4 might take the same time to come out. ^^
Really? I'm really looking forward to your latest story. Is it true that it is the story of a mother Futanari and her little son? I really wish his mother's cock was bigger than Ann's or at least 3 feet long. and I also hope that his son is a skinny little man and his mother is a tall, curvaceous and big muscular woman
Loved that buildup at the end. I understand you have an established direction for Ray to find domination hot, but I am a huge sucker for how timid and gentle Ann seems. The idea of helping an ashamed, hung futa find confidence in her body through sex seems so romantic, yet erotic to me (and she can do the same for Ray). Maybe he can continue assisting her in making content for her website in their own apartment. I feel there is also an aphrodisiac aspect of her cum that can be explored.
I really liked the reveal in the end and I hope that you build on their new relationship. Personally I hope for something in the direction of a sweet romance between the both characters. Almost all stories with futa x male end up with a relationship dominated by the futa which I don't really enjoy. Maybe you could also do something like him penetrating her penis or a balljob as she has huge balls? And if you do choose to go with a normal romance, maybe they can also have normal sex, because that also almost never happens in futa x male stories which is kinda sad for the guy in my opinion. If these ideas don't fit with this story you could also incorporate them in your future stories. But in the end these are just suggestions and I'm exited for your future stories.
It's going to be painful waiting for the next chapter ! I really "felt" this chapter , like I could hear the heartbeat of the main character everytime he was waiting for a message from Mr. H x) A masterpiece again, see you next chapter (or anything you write) ! ;)
Oh man, this series is AWESOME! Hitting all the right buttons! Please keep it up. I'm dying to read what I hope is a very long series!
Loved it. one of best I ever read. Will be waiting for next chapters.
For this story please don't build character of Ann as a pleasure hungry predator who doesn't care about other person's feelings or don't treat well. Please keep relationship romantic domination not kind of feeling less domination.
And for other story please don't make penis size more than 20 inches.
Almost not reading for the sex anymore, I’m so invested in the story. Can’t wait for the next!
I've loved all the comments you're all awesome! I know I have some spelling mistakes and missing words here and there. I will get better. Promise! Got 10k words down on ch 4 so far. I just hope you will all like where the story is going. So much pressure >.< thank so much for everything! This is really fun ^^
I hope you don't introduce other people for them to fuck and it stays wholesome between them, my heart would not be able to take it if there was ntr or ray get cheated on again after Jessica.
Absolutely stunning! Looking forward to more from you. The build up was well done with a good balance of exposition, dialogue, and events. This is dead center of my kink zone :p
Sorry for the delay >.< I've been super busy with IRL stuff. But don't worry I will finish this story though I can't say when...
Do not worry Anonymous. I will get it done. Still plenty chapters to go as well ^^
Loved this series...hoping you post the next trilogy. Would love to see where this goes from here.
For past five months I am continuously checking after 3 or 4 days intervals whether you have dropped new chapter or not but till now I have been disappointed every time. But I am hoping you will upload new chapters soon. And you are a biggest teaser so far by not completing current story and giving us information about new story about mother and son.
I really loved how you kept her true identity a secret until the end. If it had not been ragged as a transexual story I would have never guess she had a dick! Hope there are more chapters left in this story!
Eikmoo, people are actively checking back in anticipation for part 4. PLEASE update us when to expect the next chapter or if you decided discontinued the story so we're not wasting our time.
Still working on it. I don't have an ETA at the moment. I do apologize for the delay.
Take your time on part 4, this is awesome work. Excited to see if some kind of legitimate relationship develops and if there's a dom/sub dynamic.
I've honestly been looking If chapter 4 has been uploaded every couple weeks. Fuck was this good.