All Comments on 'Roommate Relations Ch. 01'

Absolutely incredible. Christ I hope Ian fucks Jess in the ass like a proper stud.

Paints her in sperm as her boyfriend agonizes next door. So so hot.

Look forward to chapter 2...when Jess was fingering her pussy in front of Kyle while imagining Ian was fucking her was so horny.

Loved the build up! This reminds me of my own college experience - if she gets with the bad boy she won't regret it. I know I didn't ;)

Don't keep us waiting too long for part 2!

Great start, please don't make us wait to long!

Working on chapter 2 of this, as well as the next installment of BMOC, but work is slow over the holidays.

Very hot. Loved it. Reminds me of my ex-gf and my ex-best friend. What they did behind my back and how turned on I was when I found out. BTW, are you the same TripleLeg24?

Third time I've read this, can't wait for the next chapter!

Ready for the next chapter. I can see it coming -- so to speak. Ian is gonna split her in half............

what a cliffhanger. when's chapter 2 coming?

Chapter 2 submitted.

If you submitted it..where the hell is it??? LIAR!!!

Give it time. It's still pending approval from the Lit editors. But I'm glad to know people want to read it.

Pathetic. But not quite as sad as adding false comments to his own story.

awesome story, great work, keep it up

This is an awesome story. I can't wait to read the other chapters. Thank you so much TripleL!

Great story.

And this is the first time I have seen honest to god trolling in lit commentary. Sad that here is not even safe any more.

Total set up story and not that well told.

As a cuck wannabe, of course I am loving it and looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Badly written.