All Comments on 'Roommate Relations Ch. 01'

ENDING WARNING (Spoiler) -

It ends with Ian and Jess basically destroying Kyle. And then it ends, with the two absolutely shitty people walking off together, and no real resolution or conclusion. It heavily implies they just live happily ever after, and Kyle is left emotionally and mentally destroyed. Proceed depending on how much you enjoy / can stomach that.

Badly written.

As a cuck wannabe, of course I am loving it and looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Total set up story and not that well told.

Great story.

And this is the first time I have seen honest to god trolling in lit commentary. Sad that here is not even safe any more.

This is an awesome story. I can't wait to read the other chapters. Thank you so much TripleL!

awesome story, great work, keep it up

Pathetic. But not quite as sad as adding false comments to his own story.

Give it time. It's still pending approval from the Lit editors. But I'm glad to know people want to read it.

If you submitted it..where the hell is it??? LIAR!!!

Chapter 2 submitted.

what a cliffhanger. when's chapter 2 coming?

Ready for the next chapter. I can see it coming -- so to speak. Ian is gonna split her in half............

Third time I've read this, can't wait for the next chapter!

Very hot. Loved it. Reminds me of my ex-gf and my ex-best friend. What they did behind my back and how turned on I was when I found out. BTW, are you the same TripleLeg24?

Working on chapter 2 of this, as well as the next installment of BMOC, but work is slow over the holidays.

Great start, please don't make us wait to long!

Don't keep us waiting too long for part 2!

Loved the build up! This reminds me of my own college experience - if she gets with the bad boy she won't regret it. I know I didn't ;)

Look forward to chapter 2...when Jess was fingering her pussy in front of Kyle while imagining Ian was fucking her was so horny.

Absolutely incredible. Christ I hope Ian fucks Jess in the ass like a proper stud.

Paints her in sperm as her boyfriend agonizes next door. So so hot.