All Comments on 'Roommates'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Just Had To Get Out The Handcuffs, Didn't You?

You had a very intriguing story going until you introduced the handcuffs. Oh well...better luck next time!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A little more please

Very nice but it ended way too soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Not believable.

Nice premise to start, but the other girls decision to just masturbate made me lose any confidence in the characters. Make it more like real life, even if it slows down the narrative.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Soooo good!!!!

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