All Comments on 'Roommates Pt. 02 - The Next Day'

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Anonymousabout 3 years ago

please keep this story going there is so much more you can write

Anonymousabout 3 years ago

Well done second chapter. Please continue. The development of the characters is very intriguing.

Billyslate about 3 years ago

Nice Chapter!

The ladies are moving along famously in their "marriage🎉" and this story definitely deserves several more chapters.

Bring on the toy shopping!!

Migbird about 3 years ago

Agree with previous 2 comments: keep this crazy love story going. Nice storyline and character development. 5 stars easily.

dirtyriceking about 3 years ago

This is a pointless story! People don't magically decide to be gay! ESPECIALLY for insurance fraud. This is insulting to the LGBT community

CwW89 about 3 years ago

Loving this story

Candy_Kane54 about 3 years ago

It's great that two people can fall in love with each other, whether they think they're hetero or homo or whatever. Love is what matters, not labels. Keep up the good work.

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Frustrated writer practicing. I think I like stories that start out simply but grow in emotional complexity. Its easy to have sex right away, but for love to last, emotional complexity is important. If you have any interesting ideas, I'd love to hear them and write a story. ...

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