by ropespace
Great story. Love the first time bondage theme with getting a bit into the headspace on why people do it. Keep it up
This story is awesome! I would have voted higher than 5 if I could have! I give it a 6 at least;)
I love the way the way gray is so sweet and gentle with Sara, and the kink community is also kind to her. Thank you for writing this and posting it here!
Thank you for a beautiful breath of fresh erotic air. Delightful! Extremely hot and intensely healthy, which is a rare combination. The joy and freedom you evoke is wondrous to behold. I hope you can create more for us— I see there are many who feel as I do.
The first thing to say is this is beautifully written, though maybe a bit short. Despite this I can only rate it a three as an E&V story. Look at the balance of the text - all the Loving detail about rope, knots and ties.
In contrast we get no detail first hand about what the woman actually being exhibited is thinking or feeling, just some second-hand observations about how her boyfriend thinks she's feeling.
I feel the emotional energy of the story is behind the bondage aspect and the exhibitionism is almost incidental. You'd probably find a more appreciative audience in the BDSM category.
Nice to see kink written by someone who clearly knows the real world kink scene!