All Comments on 'Rory and Sebastian Ch. 02'

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William smythWilliam smythabout 12 years ago
A good start

This new writer has made a fine start with two good 5 star stories that should lead to a long series. Good writing and a good story line. Keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

post faster and/or longer chapters. i'm completely enamoured by your story :)

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 12 years ago
Seb geez

You have to be upfront with him especially as you know he is a manipulative little b....

He is really going to cause trouble if you don't tell him upfront and in front of people to get it across

sowhat_14sowhat_14about 12 years ago
awwwww

i dont know why but i feel sorry for josh,he just need to be loved at any cost ...i see that in real life and it just breaks my heart ,please make the next chapter soon and make it a little longer,good job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Josh and Rory are both jealous of each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

5 stars i love this story please post chapter 3 soooonn!!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
it

really pisses me off when i read a story and then find its not bloody finished.?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I like Josh feel sorry for him

canndcanndalmost 12 years ago

Gosh, I thought girls only manipulated guys they wanted like that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good JOb!

I hope seb will get control of is Dick real soon josh is already annoying .The worst thing is to try to get rid of someone and every time you turn around there in your face smiling. And you get pulled back in cause you start off being nice. YUCK!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

ITS SO NICE TO READ SOME THING ON THIS SITE THATS IS NOT shit . A VERY PLEASENT READ

JrankcoldJrankcoldover 2 years ago

Really love this story

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