by sebastiando
This new writer has made a fine start with two good 5 star stories that should lead to a long series. Good writing and a good story line. Keep it going!
post faster and/or longer chapters. i'm completely enamoured by your story :)
You have to be upfront with him especially as you know he is a manipulative little b....
He is really going to cause trouble if you don't tell him upfront and in front of people to get it across
i dont know why but i feel sorry for josh,he just need to be loved at any cost ...i see that in real life and it just breaks my heart ,please make the next chapter soon and make it a little longer,good job
really pisses me off when i read a story and then find its not bloody finished.?
I hope seb will get control of is Dick real soon josh is already annoying .The worst thing is to try to get rid of someone and every time you turn around there in your face smiling. And you get pulled back in cause you start off being nice. YUCK!
ITS SO NICE TO READ SOME THING ON THIS SITE THATS IS NOT shit . A VERY PLEASENT READ