All Comments on 'Rory and Sebastian Ch. 02'

Really love this story

ITS SO NICE TO READ SOME THING ON THIS SITE THATS IS NOT shit . A VERY PLEASENT READ

I hope seb will get control of is Dick real soon josh is already annoying .The worst thing is to try to get rid of someone and every time you turn around there in your face smiling. And you get pulled back in cause you start off being nice. YUCK!

GREAT READ

Gosh, I thought girls only manipulated guys they wanted like that!

I like Josh feel sorry for him

really pisses me off when i read a story and then find its not bloody finished.?

5 stars i love this story please post chapter 3 soooonn!!!! :)

Josh and Rory are both jealous of each other.

i dont know why but i feel sorry for josh,he just need to be loved at any cost ...i see that in real life and it just breaks my heart ,please make the next chapter soon and make it a little longer,good job

You have to be upfront with him especially as you know he is a manipulative little b....

He is really going to cause trouble if you don't tell him upfront and in front of people to get it across

post faster and/or longer chapters. i'm completely enamoured by your story :)

This new writer has made a fine start with two good 5 star stories that should lead to a long series. Good writing and a good story line. Keep it going!