All Comments on 'Rory and Sebastian Ch. 05'

People tend to think that having a distorted body image or suffering from anorexia or bulimia are confined to women. Not the case anymore. Society is placing so much value on being stick thin and beautiful or in a man's case a muscled hunk with rugged good looks, people will do all kinds of things to themselves to fit that profile. By the time you realise there is something wrong, in most cases it's to late.

I love the way you have hinted that Rory and Sebastian have a future together and show us the obstacles they will have to overcome even while their love for each other is still fresh.

Really enjoy how this story progressing. I am glad to see Rory's POV.

Thank you very much for your comments. Writing this story from Rory's POV was really interesting and a challenge. It's been awesome to see people respond so well to these stories. Chapter 6 is quite a bit longer - so I hope people enjoy that, too.

Loving this story and looking forward to the next chapter

A definate tear jerker. I loved the ending "Its just us, Rory. Just you and me" that was just perfect.

Loved it

TO LONG.? L O L BUT BOO WHO

Chris Hemsworth makes the perfect Sebastian, with the exception of those gorgeous blue eyes, but I made them brown in my head lol.

well done! the way Seb lovingly reassured Rory was brilliant. Self-esteem issues are no joke. They lead to other mental health issues, hence his obsessive nature. Well done.

Beautiful! I wish everyone that had low self-esteem had someone like Sebastian..aware of the inner doubt that lies in most and not believe/pretend it's not real/ignore how others perceive themselves. Cannot wait to see how the story progresses and how Rory will begin to accept what Sebastian is saying is true or at least come close to seeing within himself how Sebastian sees him.

Installment. You are a brilliant storytelller.

It's been so long. I hope you'll continue the story. Every time I think I've found another story or writer as compelling, I realize I was wrong as soon as I re-read one of your chapters.

Never left a comment on this site, but this is phenomenal writing with an even greater plot line! This deserves to be published and if that's in your plans, I hope you succeed! There's another writing site, called Wattpad. Not as hardcore of course but a lot of writers on there eventually become published authors and I feel you would make it as one. Good luck on your writing journey!