All Comments on 'Roscoe'

by thornapple

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Phxray54Phxray54over 13 years ago
An Epic...

Thank you! It was well worth a few hours on a Sunday. Quite an enjoyable "tail".

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
epic !

just epic

thornapplethornappleover 13 years agoAuthor
Oops

My apologies to all. I submitted my unedited version. Very clumsy and embarrassing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Re: Oops...

Great story, original and very imaginative. I'm glad you added the 'Oops' comment, though; it explains the meltdown in names, etc at about Ch 17-18, as well as some confusing dialogue interchanges that could have easily been sorted out by adding some 'he said, she said' phrasing.

Overall, a good read, thanks for all the hard work; you show a very good insight into human emotions as they apply to situations detailed in the story. It leads me to wonder how much of 'Roscoe's Tale' might have been autobiographical!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Fun read

Note, in Chapter 23 Roscoe was named Oscar for the entire chapter. There were a few other mixups, but a really fun to read story none the less.

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