All Comments on 'Rose Pt. 01'

Hurry up and write part two. ! I can only wish I was in her place. L.

I whimpered when I realized there was no page 2

Ok, I'm ready to read part 2. And 3, 4, 5, ...

This seems like a great start to a series that I would love to read. Please continue now.

Excellent humiliation story that confirms, that when it comes to tormenting poor submissive girls, the female of the species is so much deadlier than the male. I hope you continue. I've given it 4 stars rather than 5 as I thought the orgasm part was a little rushed - the best parts were where you take your time to describe the little details, like Rose finding the girls more scary than a turn on, and when she tries to pull her knees together when the guys come in but the cuffs won't let her. Well done, you are a great erotic writer and I hope you continue.