All Comments on 'Rose Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great start

Would love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Editing

Real good original story, that can breathe like wine.

You just need an editor to get rid of mistakes.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 4 years ago

"Humans didn't have hooves and a tail." Tell me more...

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 3 years ago
*eyes pop wide*

Oh... Oh! Well. *shakes head laughing*

This definitely took a left turn at Albuquerque!

Helluva fun opener though :)

linnearlinnearabout 3 years ago
Hell Yes!

Great twist at the end there but damn it was awesome.

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Cow girl, or some other horned animal??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

As a cattle rancher, I can't even begin to think of anything less sexy than a cow. And, polled (no horns) cattle are super easy to select/breed for, you wouldn't have those around still if you were making modifications already. And what you described are more scurs than horns anyway. I like the story aside from the horrible mental image of a beautiful woman with cow legs.

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