All Comments on 'Rose Pt. 10'

I was wondering if he knocks up Rose or any of the other girls?

I Loved the series , the ending fits on the run again . Its Tim I don't understand , but I am sure you will clear that up later . I am truly sorry you don't like chapters , but your the writer . Looking forward to this story line in the future .

Thanks for the Read

txcracker

P.S. Good luck with your tricycle motors . LOL

great update and series, but still many spelling and grammar errors, my instead of me...etc..

looking forward to more future updates

Look forward to your next instalment.

i do hope you will come back soon to this

I will firstly admit that having cow/girls didn't really do much for me, not a twitch, i did keep reading for the action story plot, the same story would apply to girls being bred as sex slaves. I enjoyed the story and action

I would say this story is an 7.5/10, I like it a lot but I feel like there is something needed in it, idk what it is I just feel like it’s a little bland, I feel like it’s only killing and sex. I think your story about the cats is amazing though. Keep up the good work!

Really loved this story, had me totally in to it from the first part all the way through, couldn't even tell you the nest bit, but I love Lori she is the star for me!

The one thing that bothered me is that the whole situation didn't make sense, you have a 95% birth mortality rate, plus the amount of cows that don't make the grade and are recycled and you are down to three cows, two for breeding and nothing else left. For this to work there would have had to been hundreds of cows of all ages up to these three(and already breeding).

loved the story. Like others enjoyed the story and action scenes. I can safely say I look forward to Rose: Book 2. As well what you think up next! ^=^

Interesting story, i hope to read a part 2 and more.

More please.

As I mentioned before, this isn't my normal thing... but it's really well written, action packed and even has some pretty sexy smut ;)

I'll pop this into my 'someday' folder and hope to see you revisit this series.

Thanks for sharing your time and talent!

I need to know what happens. I really enjoyed this strange story, full of action and sex. I was wondering how you could possibly the up all the unanswered questions. I hope some day you finish the story. 5 Stars.

I love this story, please keep it going!!!!!

I love the story, it needs to continue. AAAAA+++++

Absolutely binge read this one. I am totally surprised too. I am NOT a lactation fan, and I never though I'd be into cow lust. The let the story unfold in stages was brilliant. The whole genetic predilection for bonding to master slave relations makes the whole thing believable and exciting. Well done. 5*

Read on a lark. Been edging since pt1. Great bit of work. Hoping to find the next installment.

Great story conclusion. You could have probably continued with ease!!!

Loved the hero!!

Dude... dude... this story had me. I laughed. I cried. I got a fucking erection. I demand more, I'll even pay for the ebook if I have to. I want more of this epic adventure. I MUST KNOW HOW IT ENDS!!!!!!!!!!!!

Part 2 is being written right now. Please see my BIO for details

These earlier stories don't compare with your current ones - you have definitely grown as a writer. Keep up the good work!!

This was a REALLY good story. A good mix of action and plot along with romance and sex. THANK YOU for sharing! And as I'm playing catch up and binge reading this story, I'm hoping you've finished book 2 and I can read that next. :-) Thanks again!

Just finished reading these chapters of the first book and can’t wait to read the next one. It was a very fun read

Thanks for writing

Been reading all ur stories sooo good!

So much fun!!!!! I hope you write a book 2. I'm following you........