All Comments on 'Rosemary the Slave Pt. 02'

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HectorixHectorix7 months ago

I like the story and it's style and I hope for a continuation.

One little problem in this part are the quick changes of perspective in some parts which make it hard to follow who is seeing what and whom - especially in the kitchen scene I was a bit confused what actually was happening.

Otherwise a great story.

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