by hellothere3
Pleeease continue this series. I got quite aroused by reading it. For the next one, you can talk about a day at her new workplace. She will be writing one of the wierdest scenes, as demanded by the company, and suddenly exactly that happens with her, as she is a relief model. The entire week nothing happens and just as she agrees to wokring, 'it' happens. Then group things also become normal. Please continue this.
I can't think how anyone could not think this story is anything less than exquisitely written. You have described the protagonist so well. I hope you make a very long series. It's a great read and sure got me going.
Very good idea and the start was promising. It just needed a bit more subtlety and more tension. Keep writing and working these perverted ideas. 5 stars