by SimonCW
I don't understand the wife's thinking in this case. Let sleeping dogs lie!
4
A helpful hint for all the untalented and childish failures out there who one-bomb stories: Most of the first 20 votes on most 'Loving Wives' stories are 1. Everybody knows and expects that. There's nothing surprising or exciting about it, and it doesn't even work long-term. After only a few weeks the average scores on decent stories rise above 3, so you're just wasting your time.
Great story kept my interest with every word and had enough twists to keep me guessing . I’m more than impressed 5 stars and a standing ovation !
Ahhhh alls well that ends well, she got some strange and although belatedly he got some too, complete and utter nonsense but there you go.
What would have been fun was once she was clear of the cancer he slapped divorce papers on her. But the author chickened out of providing a more satisfying end.
I agree with Boyd. let sleeping dogs. she did the crime don't release her from guilt. why burden Peter. selfish bitch
I would have given this 3 stars because it was okay, nothing special but the interchanging names really destroyed the story for me. So it's 2 stars.
Another load of bollocks with Sarah changing her name to Alison then back again and he's just a pathetic fuckwit
Dumb cuck shit, so he "made love" to Sarah? This story isn't for masculine men.
You need to keep the names of your characters constant. Sarah then Alison then Sarah. I had a difficult time reading it due to poor punctuation. An editor might help you. 3*
So the interloper gets a free pass after fucking the shit out of his wife? what kind of a story is this?
So are we supposed to feel remorse because she had cancer? She survived, now it's time to move on and she is once again being manipulative. Let him tell Sarah his fantasies, maybe it would have been better if she died from the cancer, so he can move on. She got a free pass, it should have continued on for months like hers did, not a one time thing.