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Blind_JusticeBlind_Justicealmost 3 years agoAuthor

Here's the solution to the hidden songs puzzle

- Rotten To The Core - Overkill

- Strangers In The Night - Frank Sinatra

- For The Love Of God - Steve Vai

- Wanted Dead Or Alive – Bon Jovi

- Salem - Dance With The Dead

- Wish You Were Here - Pink Floyd

- Rollin' - Limp Bizkit

- Dont'cha - Pussycat Dolls

- Jessie - Joshua Kadison

- The Ides Of March - Iron Maiden

- Out In The Real World - Stream Of Passion

- Tell me a Lie - Janie Frickle

- Orion – Metallica

- Bad Case Of Loving You – Robert Palmer

- Black No.1 -Type O Negative

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You have a truly rare imagination. Thanks for sharing it with us.

TrezeroTrezeroalmost 3 years ago

Would definitely be interested in more stories of the order of martinius!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This was an awesome story!! I would definitely want to read more.

nthusiasticnthusiasticalmost 3 years ago

Definitely MORE!!!

Lots of fun to read. I’ll bet it was a lot of fun to write, too!

bhojobhojoalmost 3 years ago

loved this story. Got strangers in the night and a Bon jovi. then I forgot about the songs cause the story was so good !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Thanks for the story. I would look forward to an expansion on the Order of Martinius theme.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Nice! More please!

TJSkywindTJSkywindalmost 3 years ago

Enjoyed. Plenty of room for expansion here on these characters. Musty old place in Massachusetts, eh? Not too near Arkham and Miskatonic University, I hope.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

PeytonMirabellePeytonMirabellealmost 3 years ago

Fun story, and one I enjoyed a lot. Thanks for sharing!

Blind_JusticeBlind_Justicealmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for all the kind words so far. This was one of the more involved stories in terms of research.

@TJSkywind: Greenbury and a ficticious space roughly 30 miles around it replace Amherst and surroundings in "my" version of Earth.

LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMealmost 3 years ago

Great story. I love your take on horny goblins. You need to write more of them. And Eric Devereux is one of the most compelling characters I've read in awhile. Why did you lavish so much depth on him rather than some of the other characters? I hope we see him again.

Ravey19Ravey19almost 3 years ago

Great story with some very interesting characters. Greenbury is still rife for cleaning up. Isn't there something sinister about the Black Lake and I think you could draw out more about the main characters especially Laura and developing a relationship with both Kelly and Eric. Perhaps Eric finds love elsewhere?

Ravey19Ravey19almost 3 years ago

Admired the concept as well as the work and effort put into creating the background and the whole story. Thoroughly enjoyed and hope there's more to come involving the team as well as Vicky. 5 stars

TravelerinmdTravelerinmdalmost 3 years ago

Loved the story. The characters and location came to life for me.

charlie48charlie48almost 3 years ago

Fabulous story, or is it the start of the Martinius chronicles.

Thank again!

IShouldWatchTVIShouldWatchTValmost 3 years ago

Great story, as usual.

I got 6 of your hidden songs (and I'm kicking myself for not finding Stream of Passion), though I found a few others:

driver's seat - Sniff 'n' The Tears

creatures of the night - Kiss

nighttime birds - the Gathering

My lips are sealed - Jim Reeves

Hey Mama - David Guetta

on my shoulders - The Dø

who are you - the Who

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefalmost 2 years ago

Wasn't expecting the mix of magic and modern times. I was expecting olden times but when Laura answered her cell phone at the first of the story, I thought Blind_Justice had screwed up. Glad I kept reading as it was made clear after a while. Interesting blend of the old and the new. Enjoyed the story and wish it would have continued a bit further. Thanks

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