All Comments on 'Round One'

I quite liked your story, but there's room for improvement. For instance, there were several typos/spelling errors. You typed "my" where you should have typed "me" in a couple of places. There were other examples as well, but I can't remember them exactly at the moment. The story was really good, though. I liked the format quite a lot and it was very true to what a girl thinks of when all this is happening to her. I liked it. Keep writing:)