All Comments on 'Roxx's Role'

Nice start. Hits all my buttons. Lesbian D/s. Small D, bigger sub. Yummy!

Needs more chapters of course. Please continue!

5/5

J

Oh damn... this is so hot. I don't normally do this but my fingers are wet... and I'm not in the shower... well not really! More, please!

It seems both got what they were wishing for. Very well written. Not rushed and the story left hanging for more. You have a very good foundation. Please continue with your construction.

Excellent work. Fantastic start to what will hopefully be a lengthy story. Loved the characters, their interactions and how erotic the build up was. Isla owning Roxie's underwear was a brilliant touch. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Five star effort!

Hello. I would just like to thank everyone for the positive comments. As per my bio, I haven't really written anything story wise before, just mainly used my poetry as a form of expression. I had done a few scribbles, mainly just writing out my fantasies, but nothing as cohesive as an actual planned story, with, I hope, follow on chapters.

I would like to thank my Mirror for the encouragement and feedback and for making me realise I could actually put this together, and all my friends over in the shadow lands who have been waiting for this to arrive.

xxx

This was very hot and highly erotic. Masterful scene building, set a beautiful flow throughout the story. Would love to read more on Roxie and Isla. Max stars from me.

I'm not a great fan of d/s but every now and again a story is published that puts an acceptable slant on it. This is one such story. Despite Isla being a dominant there is a tenderness about her which makes her a promising and perfect partner for Roxie. Your notes say that this is your first erotic story but I'm guessing that you've written other things: your writing is just too good to be an absolute beginner. Anyway, it's five stars from me and I hope we see more from you in the future.

I thought the story was brilliant

The incredibly erotic scene left me

literally shaking.

Thank you so much and please write more

Wow I knew you had talent from your poems but wow , brilliant. So damn sexy and you got the safety in aswell , all the reassurance , safe words, allowing the words to sink in they are super important esp when neither knows the limitations or subtle tells of the other. I really like that you had Roxie as the tall muscled one and not Isla, it adds a whole different twist on the story . Beautiful writing, please continue. Thank you for sharing. Jc

Not a fan of D/s, but your writing is excellent. There's story, storytelling, and writing. From my perspective you are darned close to acing all three.

Contrary to some of the other commenters, I am a fan of d/s, but only if it's done right. And this is done right. I love the dynamic you've set up between these two and look forward to reading the remaining chapters.