All Comments on 'Roy and the Necklace'

by BelicusDea

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HarvesterusaHarvesterusaabout 3 years ago
Great story

Really good story, I am looking forward to chapter 2

csltcsltabout 3 years ago
Great Start!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Omart57Omart57about 3 years ago
Very, Very Good!

Looking forward to more!

kdeville87kdeville87about 3 years ago

keep going i like it.

NaughtyGuyNatureNaughtyGuyNatureabout 3 years ago

Very interesting, looking for to the next part

justme79925justme79925about 3 years ago

Great first chapter! Hope the second part is ready soon.

Decal_lastDecal_lastabout 3 years ago

Liking the story so far but feel like the start should include more of a background

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
More Please

Great story. I loved it. I can’t wait for the next chapter(I obviously hope there will be one).

BelicusDeaBelicusDeaabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you all for your comments! I really appreciate it. I've updated my bio give it a look. The second chapter is done and I uploaded it last week, yet for some reason the site is not publishing it. Anyone has any idea why?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

good story, keep it going, author. also, I see you are planning to add a gay tag with the introduction of twins brother..... gotta skip that one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

You lost me at: “unwanted but welcomed stimulation.”

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Like the series. Was confused by your “giggling out of her elbows” comments. Never heard of that. Do very well, especially considering English isn’t your first language.

OseekerOseeker8 months ago

I'd LOVE to have a necklace like the one in your story.

I rated 4 stars but wanted to read how he took care of mom....

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