by MProst
chapters finished so soon?! :( ;) Sabine is so delightfully rebellious,spirited, having a high pain threshold and yet so sweetly feminine!! a never say die outlaw girl is kinda exciting!! :))
Roland having layers is mysterious and interesting too!! :) but way back then, female prisoners had zero privacy,as depicted here?!! ;)
..... to a very interesting storyline with appealing characters. Really looking forward to where you will take this tale. However, believe I will leave for now and come back when more chapters have been written and are available. Sadly, as it is an absorbing story, one just barely gets back into it when the short chapter is over. Will be back.
Just thought you'd be curious to know, I'm a member of a writing group and I actually sent some people a link to your story as an example of excellent sex writing.
Loved this, hope you finish the next chapter when you get a chance!
Overlooking the non consent its a great little storyline and im enjoying it