All Comments on 'Royal Sentence Ch. 02-03'

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wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyabout 7 years ago
a never say die outlaw girl, namely Sabine, is delightfully exciting!! :))

chapters finished so soon?! :( ;) Sabine is so delightfully rebellious,spirited, having a high pain threshold and yet so sweetly feminine!! a never say die outlaw girl is kinda exciting!! :))

Roland having layers is mysterious and interesting too!! :) but way back then, female prisoners had zero privacy,as depicted here?!! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More please

Totally enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

She needs to find a way to knife him, and then kill the king.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
YAY

So glad to see Sabine again. Eagerly awaiting the next release.!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great stuff!

Eager to see how this progresses. Can't wait for the post

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Badass!

Lovin' Sabine! Hope she can turn the tables

Horseman68Horseman68about 7 years ago
Absorbing Beginning.....

..... to a very interesting storyline with appealing characters. Really looking forward to where you will take this tale. However, believe I will leave for now and come back when more chapters have been written and are available. Sadly, as it is an absorbing story, one just barely gets back into it when the short chapter is over. Will be back.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very well done

I am totally awaiting the next installment ! Hats off!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent Writing!

Just thought you'd be curious to know, I'm a member of a writing group and I actually sent some people a link to your story as an example of excellent sex writing.

Loved this, hope you finish the next chapter when you get a chance!

longswordslongswordsabout 6 years ago
overlooking the obvious

Overlooking the non consent its a great little storyline and im enjoying it

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