All Comments on 'Royalty Brought Low Pt. 03'

Ridiculous

Stop now while you're still behind. Not a single clever or original thing in this mess. Thoroughly detestable characters. Violence without rhyme or reason. Just plain awful.

Fuck the naysayers. I like where this is going; the best part is that I found you while you're new. I've been reading stories on here for years, and YOU made me finally join. In fact, you inspired my username. I wanted to be able to favorite you so I could follow your stories. Ok, maybe this story has a similar plot to some we've seen before, but aren't they all? I think if you build the characters more, this could be fantastic. The first story gives us the important background info, and the next 2 both had some action, but I like my stories a little longer; I don't always want novels, but 1 page is a little short, in my personal opinion. I really like where this could go. I think your writing is great, especially because it isn't full of terrible spelling and grammatical errors (I find those so distracting that I sometimes can't even get off!) At any rate, please continue!

For some reason other people don't seem to like this one, but I thought it was quite good. The writing is descriptive and colourful, and the progression of the domination and general mindfuck is well done. Really hot story, as always.