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Anonymousabout 6 years agokudos
Kudos for your use of the word 'tenterhooks'.
However, 'cunt' is not usually a loving term, and I don't think it worked well here where you were trying to convey the special feelings between these two.
All-in-all, not bad, thanks.
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