All Comments on 'Rugby Fans'

This is the first story I have read of yours and found it a good read! Quite a fantasy! I must say I enjoyed it and found it arousing...thank you!

soo she goes from a little timid to slut just to prove she is gay? what a buch of crap.

Good story, but you need to proof read as all the mistakes put me off.

A good idea, no matter how good, if poorly communicated, is lost. Rife with errors, dropped words, incomplete and run-on sentences, your submission clouds what could have been a decent tale.

You have to put the work into it. You can't make the reader proof and interpret as they go.

Would have preferred to read about how the big rugby boys shot some baby gravy up Tammy and made her pregnant. Other than that a good story.