by ElizaGrey
Wow, wasn't expecting such a good reading. I'm a sucker for romance, really enjoying this. Please post another chapter soon, I'll die otherwise
I really hope this gets picked up by a publisher - I want a paperback of it to reread over and over!!
I am thinking that a lot of random stuff keeps happening to allow him to keep finding her.. If this version of the story ends up positive it would be interesting to write an alternative version from his perspective where he is not the nice guy.. And maybe he could even eventually become the nice guy, but for the alt version I don't think he would have to..
Hi, Dwfree_V2 - thank you for your thoughts - that would be a *very* different story to the one I've written, with very different characters.
I don't want to post any spoilers, but I will say that much as I love reading thrillers and stories with darker twists in the tale, I don't often write them myself.
I write romance (with plenty of added smut!) - the "random stuff" is old-fashioned fate, kismet & coincidence... IMO, there are enough stories out there where "Mr Perfect" turns out to not be a nice guy, and too few where proper romance co-exists with kink.
Sam can be problematic, sure, and I'm not saying there isn't drama ahead, but the "something more sinister" route isn't really what I'm about, so I wouldn't love to see my characters forced into that setting. EG x
Thank you SO much to all my anon smut-kittens!
Your comments really do make me smile - so so pleased y'all are enjoying my book!
Please do keep reading & letting me know what you think. EG x
Sort of wanna save the next chunk of this so it's not all gone at once... not gonna tho!!
Ha! I can relate... you can always re-read from the start!
Thanks for commenting, EG x
Really well done on this - I am SO excited to jump into the next part - you build the anticipation amazingly well!
Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!
Honestly makes my day to know so many of your are enjoying this - I really do appreciate your comments.
(Keep 'em coming!) EG x
Haha! I hope you didn't stay up *too* late... but I hope you enjoyed all the same! EG x