All Comments on 'Rules are Made to be Broken Ch. 09'

by ElizaGrey

Sort by:
  • 22 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is getting SO good!

Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

OH MY GARSH I LOVE THISSSSSSS

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Pleeeeeease post more soon!

Submisky35Submisky35over 1 year ago

I expect that all your readers are "looking forward to seeing where it goes too."

Excellent story, well told and well written.

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you so much for your comments - I'm so pleased you're enjoying my story!

I just hit publish on chapter 12, so hopefully it'll be up for you soon! EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well that was hot!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

I'm glad you loved it!!

There's still more to come - hold on tight and keep reading! EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

*bookmarks this chapter for several re-reads* ...that was FIRE! Thank you writer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

SO refreshing to read about a playroom that's not all everything's red and/or dungeoney!!

(Also, this was way hot, but I felt like credit was due for the decor too!)

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you! So glad y'all are loving it!

(And thank you re: the decor comment too - I figure if a DOm has more money than he knows what to do with, aesthetics are important!!) EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Uh, dream playroom!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I wanna go plaaaaay!!! ...sounds SO perfect.

aBrokenSwordaBrokenSwordover 1 year ago

I am loving this. I stayed up late reading, despite knowing I had to get up early. It's very very good.

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Aww, thank you aBrokenSword - I hope you weren't too exhausted the next day!

Thank you anons too - I figure a millionaire would have a great looking playroom, right? EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just can't get enough of this.

It's so well written, I love all the characters and the kink is FIRE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I would have jumped at the private arrangement!! ^_^ ...maybe I have less principles than Jess, or maybe I just have a really big crush on Sam!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Well you know, he *is* pretty crush-worthy!

Thanks so much for your comments!

EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

His playroom set up sounds sweet!

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you, I'm glad you think so!

Thanks for reading, EG x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is SO f*cking HOT!

Can't get through it fast enough!

Ella XX

ElizaGreyElizaGreyover 1 year agoAuthor

So pleased you're enjoying it Ella!

EG x

cmj711cmj711over 1 year ago

The chemistry you've created with them is sooo enjoyable!

Thank you!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userElizaGrey@ElizaGrey
Sassy, smutty, kink-filled stories to spice up your day... or night ;) Read all the stories I've shared here? Find more of my work on Amazon: https://amzn.to/3kXGYxF ;) For more about me, keep scrolling! ...EG x ========================================================== [Le...