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"Excuse me?" the man said.
"I want this booth. In fact, I think both of you are going to serve as my entertainment." Nela said. "Take your clothes off."
The girl stood up and started to unzip her dress.
"Trish, stop."
The girl stopped. Nela looked at the man dumbfounded.
"I said take your clothes off."
The man stood up. His eyes piercing hers like daggers.
"Why don't you take your clothes off." the man said.
To Nela and her friends' surprise, her hands reached up and slipped off each strap of her dress, letting the front fall and revealing her black lingerie.
"How are you doing this?" Nela asked.
The man looked at his date, who had proceeded with Nela's repeated command and now stood naked. The commotion below also caught his attention. He looked back at Nela.
"Stop."
Nela's hands stopped at her bra.
"Who the hell are you?" the man said.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agoInteresting, how Nela, a woman gives commands that put other women in very degrading positions. I love the misogyny of the whole scenario.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoThe problem with all "absolute mind control" stories is that the victims basically turn into sex dolls, indistinguishable from each other and it becomes kind of bland and repetitive.
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis was interesting because I was thinking oh the main character isnt a sociopath and then his actions basically were of a sociopath because he believed he could decide what the determining factors of good and bad were, as if they were black and white.
I dont like it when people call me creep, so they are bad, so I can punish them.
It's the kind of logic pyschopaths use.
And then says he has a moral compass. His moral compass is highly immoral.
I'm not sure if this was intended or not by the author? Definitely interesting. Liked it a lot, although I did sense a lot of hatred... and was wondering if that was the character or the author. Again, it made me think!
zena99over 3 years agoAt least Alex has somewhat of a moral code. Nela needs to pay for being such a bitch.
