All Comments on 'Run in with the Law'

Brush please come back to writing, please 😭 this is a 5 star all day

This was really hot. Wow - their relationship is 🔥 🔥 🔥

Damn Kitty!!! You're on FIRE or is that just me!?! At first I was hopping it was Grant and then I just KNEW it was him! And don't listen to Anon saying revealing it was her man ruined it because it DIDN'T!!! I thought it was HOTTER!!! WHEW!!! And he sounds FINE AF!!! So does she though!!! I agree with other commenters Where Can I Find A Man Like This!?! I STRONGLY believe though that they're ONLY in peoples minds who then put them in a story line that's HOT AF!!! Thank you Kitty!!!

That was soo hot until you realise it's just her bf, ruined the hot resistant sex theme

F the police lol..

So quick so goood

Love the ending! Pleasantly surprised and would love to read more about these two. Excellent work!

So so good!

I love this! It's so fun!

I loved the twist that it turned out to be Grant in the end. You are an pretty good writer

Loved it!

I love role playing between real couples. They're realistic and relatable without them leaving me with an awkward guilt for enjoying and getting turned on by reluctance, non consensual, rough sex, possessive story line.

Plus gives me ideas for what I'll do when I get into my next relationship. Thanks for this eroticlitkitty.

It would have been greater had he been a real cop hired by her boyfriend to keep an eye on her.

Loved it!!!

Loved it, even before the surprise ending!

This wonderful piece would be so much better if there was some reason why she couldn't identify the officer ie too dark

This is my favorite kind of story.

I had a feeling it might be Grant! good story.......

I liked that they knew each other. Awesome story!

Damn, so good the second time around

Thanks for the love Kitty! I'm glad I checked out your story too because it was well worth the read! So hot!!!

great story up until the end. i just hate it when the guy is someone the woman knows.

Loved it.

Love it. Would like to do this with my man!

Loved it, loved it, loved it! I was feeling kind of bad for Grant but after I started to realized that Grant and the cop were the same person, I was completely taken away!!

.....my husband has NEVER played dirty cop like that.....I want one lol!!! Such a hotttt story, my god, I agree with the anon below...I can't breathe!!!!!!!!!

As soon as i catch my breath, i will be able to comment...

Where can I find a man like that!!!!!

OK that was good, didn't see the boyfriend playing cop cumming!

This "quickie" was smokin' not! Your stories are great whether long to short! I hope you never stop giving us fans great chapters to read. As for the grammatical errors, I know there has to be some editors or english teachers within the membership roster that will be happy to help you out! Keep cranking out those Hottt!!! Stories! Meow!

This story was fantastic! Soo hot, definitely a favorite of mine. But you need to learn the difference between a comma and a semicolon. That bothered me a lot :P

There is good and wow....this is WOW! Good stuff chica...now give us more!

Really a hot story....but can you PLEASE finish the Jason's series? I need to know how they will end up.

Whew...FI-YA!!!

I thought this was so hot.. I have to take a cold shower.. please finish Jason story.. I fell in love iwth it..

yup.... Goin to take a very cold shower

can we have more of these two.please! i will give the highest number.

your writing was hella hot as always, and the momentum was a perfect escalation, de-escalation for a quickie... but i want you to finish jason's story (she pouted). seriously, this was very nice. well done!

I read your other story so I kind of saw the ending but it was still super hot and sexy. So, glad you see you are writing again.

This is hott and just sexy as heck. Keep it up... Loved It:>)

great job.... certainly put a smile on my face.

Five.

Very sexy

Glad you're back to writing, can't wait to see what you write next.