All Comments on 'Rune Guard 02'

Another fine chapter in this saga!

I like the Tempest - and her biting wit! She's a hoot.

Enjoyed the second installment. Keep it going. Can't wait until your next installment.

I like it keep going , Good story

Keep it up great stuff.

Well done mixing fantasy with a story that happens to have sex in it. It is well written and rounded, it flows nicely. I haven't had the chance to read much of your other material yet, is this the only story in this setting? Or are more of your stories set here? Thanks in advance.

This story is fun to read: Light, humorous, and well-crafted. The movie references that none of them understand makes me chuckle. I would love to read many more chapters of this story, and the 'world building' is good enough to support other stories with different characters. Well done!

I have one very minor quibble. The scene with the goblins does not identify them as goblins until it is all over. Being silly humans we assume everything is human until told otherwise (at least this silly human does.)

[dontyouwishyouknew] Reread the paragraph right before the Ghostbusters reference.

Truly enjoyed chapter 2 & 1 that I reread just get it all straight. I really like this series and hope there’s plenty more.

This part was great too, Thank you for Sharing.

Great story. Looking forward to more

I can’t help but notice that you are fond of breaking the fifth wall with modern references that the characters themselves don’t understand.