All Comments on 'Runner Girl Ch. 01'

I'm so glad you are back, keep on writing your words are pure music.

DB, a fine start to what promises to be another excellent series. As us your wont, interesting characters, believable interactions, developing relationships, skillfully written.

Back into it, huh? Awesome! Excited for another fine story from you, Donna.

This is starting well, but not much to go on yet. Looking forward to a rapid download.

Wow, it seems like forever since you had me beta-read these first few chapters! I'd forgotten how much fun that scene in William's apartment is, and how entertainingly skeptical Amy and John both are about the double date.

I think your readers are really going to enjoy where this one goes and the surprises along the way ...

After this chapter I feel like I have a good grasp on the 4 Characters. The banter and dialog between them is believable and enlightening as to their motivations. Looking forward to more.

Looking forward to reading on!

only comment? it's not "walla, its "voila", a french word.

Wow the tendency to profile is violent on Amy's part!

The cast is mostly known to us already. With a handoff by Tracy and William we will shift our attention to Amy and John.

Let the games begin.

Wow, that's some assessment, lol. It's the small things like that that makes your work so exceptional. Thanks for posting

Th'last paragraph earned you 5 stars!