All Comments on 'Runner Girl Ch. 02'

Oh goody.

Glad your third story is unfolding for us.

The character development is already grabbing me, as happened with Subway and Flower. Your characters really are that: 'characters'. Which is a refreshing alternative to many of the thin, silhouette-like people that populate other works on this site.

They set your work apart.

Thank you for introducing us to them.

I love the way William and Tracy are such a large, fun presence in this chapter without overwhelming the budding attraction between John and Amy. I think it's refreshing too that this story would be over before chapter 3 could even start if William and Tracy weren't there to keep the pressure on! Well, maybe not. Maybe Anne the therapist would be able to convince Amy to give John a second try.

The last scene is great too, for the building of Amy's character and the focus of the story. Super well done!

First time commenter, long time-well non stop today....that's like 6 hours-reader. You write really engaging tales. I am looking forward to the remaining 11 chapters. I was so enamoured of your characters that I blew off the gym, grocery shopping and even picking up the phone.

Your 'daily' Postings seem to have stopped.

Last one was on the 5th and today is the 7th.

Problems?

Hope not 'cos I was getting interested.

Yes, there does seem to be a problem, but not on my end. I posted chapters 1-8 and for some reason 3 is still stuck "pending approval'. I have no idea why, but I've emailed the site administrator and hope they can solve the problem today? I'll post another comment if I get a resolution. Sorry for the delay! Donna

Whatever it was, the problem is fixed. There are chapters lined up for every day. Sorry for the delay and thanks for caring! Donna

Really? She doesnt like either guy or dating but a simple finger lick gets you in the door? And he did this in front of his friends no less? I dont want to give the whole chapter away, If I havent already. Well done Miss Donna.. Well done.

From the chapter headings it is kind of obvious that the focus will be on super

salesman, John, but I wonder if she is foolishly discarding Keith without getting

to know Him.

I like how you're setting up Amy's character. She has a realistic, haunted tone that will make her story deeper. And it's good to see William and Tracy again :)

I only thought we knew who these people were

willing to learn