All Comments on 'Running From Wolves Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh is he going to be pissed.

She may love him but she obviously has no faith in him. I hope he gives her what for when he finds her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I see in her future...a big ball and chain.

He is going to have to tie her down so she will take the time to see that he will protect and fight for her. Poor girl, always running.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 8 years ago
she isnt very likeable.

i feel sorry for the guy

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

You need an editor. The grammatical errors detract from the flow of your story. It's a good one and deserves better than that. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very nice. Love the twist!

Please post more soon. Love the twist! Need more!

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Just a loveable pain in the ass, with no one to call her own. I'm in my twenties, and I just wanna find my person.

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